Thursday, December 9, 2010

Dead-end Iteration Critique


The above image was supposed to be a dot composition showing anonymity.  I realize now that this sort of stacking doesn't show a lack of identity but instead has more congested connotation.  The image also appears very flat and uninteresting.  The negative space that has been left around the dots is awkward and gives a strong diagonal line from corner to corner almost making a 50/50 composition.

1 comment:

  1. Isn't it satisfying to know now what you couldn't see just a few short months ago?

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