The inversion to black background/white bird is quite nice. I'm glad to see you took Frankie's critic and implemented it.
I want to point out a few transitions that are still not working. I'm pointing them out because you have a couple of transitions that are quite successful and I want you to recognize that you do have a developing sensitivity to motion and animation - don't give up on it!
The transition (zoom) from bird to white is very integrated and interesting. Whereas the transition to black (fade) isn't as integrated or interesting as it could be.
The transition from tree to path (reveal from behind the tree) is subtle and works. Whereas the transition from white to tree (wipe) is too harsh and foreign.
The inversion to black background/white bird is quite nice. I'm glad to see you took Frankie's critic and implemented it.
ReplyDeleteI want to point out a few transitions that are still not working. I'm pointing them out because you have a couple of transitions that are quite successful and I want you to recognize that you do have a developing sensitivity to motion and animation - don't give up on it!
The transition (zoom) from bird to white is very integrated and interesting. Whereas the transition to black (fade) isn't as integrated or interesting as it could be.
The transition from tree to path (reveal from behind the tree) is subtle and works. Whereas the transition from white to tree (wipe) is too harsh and foreign.